Thursday, April 16, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! Light House! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.5

Am overwhelmed with guilt, you see,
Due to paucity of time, my deadlines
Thought you alone will understand,
I axed your name off the do list.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Rakesh Bedi 31 July 2009

Yes, a beatiful poem, mamta! Very intense and embedded with deep meanings; my compliments! !

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 25 April 2009

A meaningful poem of leading light superbly composed

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 April 2009

A complex thought woven with beautiful, silky word-threads. Rich tapestry; vivid pictures.........I'm speechless!

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Kesav Easwaran 23 April 2009

The light house...stationary...stands alone in the troubled sea...spreads light for the sake of vessels to feel their directions...feels darkness inside? ...great symbolic write...10+

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Vaibhav Pandey 22 April 2009

a very well written poem ma'm....I loved it.....10

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premji premji 21 April 2009

mamtaji, you erect a lighthouse in the open mind of readers.....thanks........

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Reshma Ramesh 18 April 2009

well penned................

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Vidi Writes 17 April 2009

Human fantasies, comforts and and luxuriates Creates a zone of darkness at times. Human weaknesses create mystery gateways Revealing the dark thoughts of man. There is the need of this erected Light House All Far-Near vision cleared with its light and height. Superb theme. Worth reading many a times. Thank you dear poet.

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