Like That Poem by M.J. Lemon

Like That

Rating: 5.0


I once got asked
how to write poetry
Get a typewriter
i said
before realizing
suddenly
this wasn't 1983
but close to 2023
I meant a device
a laptop something
like that
it wasn't at all like that
time i got asked about living with a hernia
because I have
no idea
about that
and i got confused
with somebody else
I was thinking about
something before
I got distracted
like that
time i thought
it would be amazing to take some
chalk and run it across
the pavement in a way
that words formed and
I could take a picture
with my android
and publish it on
my page
and then just
like that
i realized i had had
way better ideas
Now, I like that.

Sunday, June 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: observation,realization,reflection,self
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 29 July 2020

what I think or believe that's right what you think or believe what s/he thinks or believes right, all are right in own ground not that is 6 or not that is 9 just a number but opposite ground shows different what is truth or what is wrong I do not know but in present time, pot and activity I find out my self i do not wanna defame others I do not wanna object on any belief or thinking all are like that or all are not like that

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Susan Williams 02 August 2020

Enjoyed the heck out of this stream of consciousness poem! ! ! ! ! Your mind is a fascinating playground - no wonder your topics are so varied and your meanings are so intense and your humor is so catching! ! ! Let us know when the chalk is coming out- I have to see that! ! ! 10+++ because you are so novel and fun and cryptic like that!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 June 2022

I liked this poem and the title too. Simple and clear expression.....5 stars.

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M.J. Lemon 23 January 2024

Many thanks, Dillip. Much appreciated.

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Richard Wlodarski 05 June 2022

Whenever I think of typewriters now, I think of Woody Allen's great collection.

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M.J. Lemon 04 December 2023

And the fact that typewriter collections actually have to be insured these days, , , , How the world has changed! Thanks for reading, Richard.

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Bri Edwards 02 January 2021

'and i got confused with somebody else I was thinking about something before I got distracted' ------------------------------------ Old age is (sometimes) 'like that'! ;) bri

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2020

How to compose a poetry is well executed in this poem with its observation, realisation and reflection of mind. Beautiful poem really. Thanks for sharing. Five stars.

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Mj Lemon 08 December 2020

So much appreciated, Kumarmani. Thank you so much for reading.

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Mj Lemon 18 September 2020

Thank you so much, Valsa. It really is amazing how so much happens just like that. I sense we are seeing things like that so frequently under these different circumstances.

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