Menu
Thursday, November 19, 2009

Like The Returning Waves

Rating: 5.0
LIKE THE RETURNING WAVES

The fragrance of love, you do not feel
Exuding from my agonies, pangs and grief
Wounds of harsh words that did not heal
You bestowed upon me, in my love’s brief
Wrapped around my heart is a long reel
Of memories, dreams like coral reef
Heart felt passions and the love sessions
The foaming waves and a great flair
For me notions your living fashions
Turned your head and give yourself air
You do not strive to establish relations
Like the returning wave who leaves a layer
Of the oceanic species and her beautiful signs
Can you not revive the deep love of mine?
akram saqib
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
COMMENTS
Rehana Nazli 02 December 2009
You do not strive to establish relations Like the returning wave who leaves a layer Of the oceanic species and her beautiful signs Can you not revive the deep love of mine? Good analogy of returning waves to explain your loved one's way of being with you. A romantic poem, lovely to read.
0 0 Reply
Ejaz Khan 01 December 2009
Very rich and interesting poetry here, well deserved tenner, Saqib, really enjoyed it!
0 0 Reply
Anjali Sinha 28 November 2009
Like the returning wave who leaves a layer Of the oceanic species and her beautiful signs Can you not revive the deep love of mine? Intense poetry I loved it! ! ! ! ! -10 anjali
0 0 Reply
Seema Chowdhury 20 November 2009
good and touchy words. what comes form the heart touches the heart. thanks for sharing
0 0 Reply
Rehana Nazli 19 November 2009
Wrapped around my heart is a long reel Of memories, dreams like coral reef Heart felt passions and the love sessions The foaming waves and a great flair Beautiful imagery in describing your experience of loving relation to cherish the memories for all times.
0 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

1/20/2021 1:37:25 PM # 1.0.0.407