Lily's Shade-Κρίνου Σκιά Poem by Kostas Lagos

Lily's Shade-Κρίνου Σκιά

Rating: 5.0


Like a lily's shade

the sadness in your visage

by the candles' light





Σαν κρίνου σκιά

η θλίψη στην όψη σου

στο φως των κεριών

Sunday, April 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 27 April 2018

In the candle light a beautiful face looking pale and sad but it's still a beauty. A nice poem.

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Kostas Lagos 27 April 2018

Thak you mr Jawad! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Rebecca Navarre 16 April 2018

Ever So Beautifully And Powerfully Painted! ! ! ! ! Very Moving! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kostas Lagos 17 April 2018

Thanks a lot for you really inspiring comment!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 April 2018

Such a beautiful haiku! I find a high spirited poetic research in depicting sadness! Fantastic use of simile! appreciated......10

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Kostas Lagos 16 April 2018

Thank you very much.So many nice words...

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Valsa George 15 April 2018

Lily has a pale shade! A sad face too will look pale and it is more visible in candle light! A nice senryu!

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Kostas Lagos 15 April 2018

Exactly the picture I had in mind! Thank you!

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 April 2018

Lovely haiku. The shade of a lily on a sad visage caught in the candle's light. Beautifully penned.10

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Kostas Lagos 10 April 2018

Such a generous comment! Thank you Nudershada!

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