Like a lily's shade
the sadness in your visage
by the candles' light
Σαν κρίνου σκιά
η θλίψη στην όψη σου
στο φως των κεριών
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Such a beautiful haiku! I find a high spirited poetic research in depicting sadness! Fantastic use of simile! appreciated......10
Lily has a pale shade! A sad face too will look pale and it is more visible in candle light! A nice senryu!
Lovely haiku. The shade of a lily on a sad visage caught in the candle's light. Beautifully penned.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In the candle light a beautiful face looking pale and sad but it's still a beauty. A nice poem.
Thak you mr Jawad! Glad you enjoyed it!