Loke Kok yee


Limerick-The Fighter Pilot-13 - Poem by Loke Kok yee

This fighter pilot was flying during an air display
Saw the huge crowd and got carried away
His manoeuvres got lower
The ground came nearer
It took a week to fill the hole on the runway

Topic(s) of this poem: humor

Form: Limerick


Comments about Limerick-The Fighter Pilot-13 by Loke Kok yee

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/13/2015 12:09:00 AM)


    Ha ha ha...never get carried away by anything is the ultimate message.............Otherwise HOLE will be deep to fill.. (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (11/12/2015 9:12:00 PM)


    Very very interesting! You have created two memorable characters... the great hunter and fighter pilot! (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/12/2015 9:31:00 AM)


    It took a week to fill the hole on the runway
    Haha! very witty.10
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015



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