Loke Kok yee


Limerick-The Fighter Pilot-14 - Poem by Loke Kok yee

This fighter pilot was on a transit flight
In navigation he was not so bright
His compass he read wrong
But his fuel did not last long
He was picked up from the sea in a state of fright

Topic(s) of this poem: humor

Form: Limerick


Comments about Limerick-The Fighter Pilot-14 by Loke Kok yee

  • Bri Edwards (5/17/2016 12:21:00 PM)


    Bro, besides one tiny typo, I would change one word. Otherwise, this is nice rhyming verse and quite entertaining!

    Probably a Malaysian pilot.

    Bri :)
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    Loke Kok Yee (5/17/2016 12:43:00 PM)

    With eyes like yours you will make a great fighter pilot
    thanks for pointing out the typo.

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/15/2015 12:14:00 AM)


    It is good that he was alive.....We may look forward for another flight......Lovely, Sir. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/14/2015 6:25:00 PM)


    Wonderful imaginary. Amusing one. Thanks for sharing. - - - - 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 17, 2016


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