Limerick-The Floozy-1 Poem by Loke Kok yee

Though the Limerick is meant to be humourous, here, i feel sad again. Those who dress up like this are like circus clowns who laugh to show the world but cry from within. Loke, you have a special talent for Limericks and images too.

Bri, I read several times. First reaction- -said to myself, Too true. After a second and third reading, the humour came bubbling to the surface. I reread and began to scroll down....and went some innocence, falling victim to.... Great humour, Bri!

well, i FINALLY found the photo i was searching for! ! ! i'll send the link to MJ Lemon soon, before PH erases the page to protect the innocent. :)

i have seen much younger (i think) women with eyes made similarly. aging can be tough on egos. and why not try to look one's best! ? she may just look like 'another old woman' without (so much) makeup, and is trying to save some of her youth. bri ;)

But, ....................seriously.................. actually, i've seen people who apparently were obsessive-compulsive with makeup. they are probably frequently nice people, just as 'very attractive' people can be 'not nice'. REMEMBER the saying: you can't tell a book by its cover! AND beauty is in the eye of the beholder! ! to MyPoemList. thanks. bri :)

NICE rhythm, and a bit of humor. i'll give you 'poetic license' for blear. OOPS! my error! ! ! i did not know of the definition of blear; i AM familiar with bleary. How DID you get a photo of my beloved mother! ? the photo shall haunt my dreams ceaselessly! (to be continued) ...