Limerick-The Zebra Poem by Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Zebra

Rating: 5.0


This zebra away from the herd did stray
Alone, from predators she’ll soon fall prey
A giraffe came along
Asked what was wrong
Hop on my neck and you’ll see them straightaway

Limerick-The Zebra
Thursday, November 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Amazing...... true friendship.....Liked it Mr. Loke.

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Bri Edwards 12 November 2015

the count of the limerick is 'good enough' for me; i'll allow it! but HOW THE HELL did you get those two dudes to cooperate for the photo? ? ! they weren't trying to mate..............., WERE they? nice one. bri :) this begs me to make a responsive poem, but, alas, my time is up for tonight.

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Valsa George 12 November 2015

Beautiful limerick illustrated with a beautiful picture! Now the zebra can command a panoramic view!

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Kelly Kurt 12 November 2015

Now that is cooperation.: -)

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Sanjukta Nag 12 November 2015

Wow... nice picture and you explained it well.10

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Akhtar Jawad 12 November 2015

Yes he has a long neck and see what others cannot...............................10

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