Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Zebra - Poem by Loke Kok yee

This zebra away from the herd did stray
Alone, from predators she’ll soon fall prey
A giraffe came along
Asked what was wrong
Hop on my neck and you’ll see them straightaway

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick-The Zebra by Loke Kok yee

  • Bri Edwards (11/12/2015 11:04:00 PM)

    the count of the limerick is 'good enough' for me; i'll allow it! but HOW THE HELL did you get those two dudes to cooperate for the photo? ? ! they weren't trying to mate..............., WERE they?

    nice one. bri :)

    this begs me to make a responsive poem, but, alas, my time is up for tonight.
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  • Valsa George (11/12/2015 9:08:00 PM)

    Beautiful limerick illustrated with a beautiful picture! Now the zebra can command a panoramic view! (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/12/2015 10:47:00 AM)

    Now that is cooperation.: -) (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/12/2015 9:28:00 AM)

    Wow... nice picture and you explained it well.10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/12/2015 9:20:00 AM)

    Yes he has a long neck and see what others cannot...............................10 (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/12/2015 2:49:00 AM)

    Amazing...... true friendship.....Liked it Mr. Loke. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015

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