Lion Around Poem by Aqua Flower

Lion Around

Rating: 5.0


In the castle, I am lying around
dreaming of my lion
pouting all the time
tick...tock...as time goes by
moments are so very dry
should I let him go?
to say goodbye of the love he wants to bestow
upon his princess, his tigress, his lover
to say goodbye to a love like no other
Want to lie around with my lion
he is the one that keeps my flying

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Lion Around
Saturday, March 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

'to say goodbye of the love he wants to bestow' Perhaps you wanted to use 'to', not 'of'? ? ? What do I KNOW? ? ? bri : )

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Aqua Flower 15 July 2023

You are right....my English sucks when the emotions take over. Thank you. I'll see if I can make the oorrection. Liger..? Yes, .I know the term and we have used it many times in our playful conversations in the past.

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

Interspecies mating? Yes. You may give birth to a liger. 'Apparently macaque monkeys in Japan routinely engage in sexual behavior with deer.'

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Rajnish Manga 09 March 2019

It's the magic potion of love that brings lovers closer. The poem is all about love and longing explained with a fascinating imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 March 2019

A fantastic write... great imagery! Fascinating expression... loved reading this beautiful poem..10

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

(cont.) Did Dillip and Rajnish NOT NOTICE what I call typos? ? Or did they want to be 'nice' to you, poetess, and not mention THEM? ? Hmm? : ))) I'll give 5 stars nonetheless. There! I did it. ;)

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

'Want to lie around with my lion' Since I see no question mark, I'm guessing you meant to have 'I' at the start of this line.

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

'he is the one that keeps my flying' Wait a moment. Did you, Aqua Flower, leave some word(s) off the end of your last line? Pehaps 'fish' or 'flags? , OR did you mean to type 'me', not 'my'/? : ))))

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

(cont.) 'The liger is distinct from the similar hybrid called the tigon, and is the largest of all known extant felines. They enjoy swimming, which is a characteristic of tigers, and are very sociable like lions.'

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

'The liger is a hybrid offspring of a male lion (Panthera leo) and a tigress, or female tiger (Panthera tigris) .The liger has parents in the same genus but of different species.' (cont.)

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