Little Children Lost Poem by Valerie Dohren

Little Children Lost

Rating: 4.4


Butterflies, sweet butterflies
Laughter lighting up their eyes
Now they`ve gone to Paradise

Do they dance and do they play
Upon the stars so far away
Watching o`er the ones who pray

And can they see, or are they blind
Lost to love and humankind
Unconstrained and unconfined

Are they dark or are they fair
With dusky eyes or golden hair
Feathers floating in the air

And do they weep or do they sing
Fly with angels on the wing
Joyously or suffering

For`er to dwell in shining streams
Lost to life and lost in dreams
Lost forever now it seems

Lost in space and lost in time
But not in prose and not in rhyme
Still they dwell in thought sublime

And are they cold or are they warm
Whispering softly through the storm
Quiet now, the born unborn

Round, round and around they go
Backwards, forwards, to and fro
Swinging high and swinging low

Only those who love them know

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 14 February 2012

Wonderful.

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Eric Cockrell 14 February 2012

they live forever in the heart of humanity, for they are it's beating!

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Naomi Hinshaw-hersh 15 February 2012

Excellent! Poignantly promising.

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Kayode Peter Ogunleye 08 November 2017

Round, round and around they go Backwards, forwards, to and fro Swinging high and swinging low Love this verse. It really depict the children character.

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Valerie Dohren 08 November 2017

Pleased you enjoyed reading, and thank you for commenting.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 13 July 2012

swinging in nature....................! !

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Danny Draper 15 March 2012

There are eternal thoughts strung and enmeshed infinitely and inexplicably into the day and should from time to time cause us to pause and cautiously think. This is such a concept of love in kind essence. An affirmation not anchored to a temporal source but with an innate timelessness, inherently worthy of our retention. This is one of those beautifully considered, precisely crafted and deftly expanded pieces that will recall one to touch that gentle human essence and its connection to life. Thank you for your writing.

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Patti Masterman 05 March 2012

What a precious poem, and that last line- it's sublime..it echoes my own thoughts on the matter. Beautiful write here.

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Walterrean Salley 17 February 2012

This is quite timeless. 10

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