Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 7,071 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Little Hearts - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Little hearts soft cast in gold
With eyes of azure blue
Smiles so lovely to behold
With tears as morning dew

Dainty hands like buds unfurled
Reach out to touch your lips
Shell-styled ears yet softly whorled
And tiny finger tips

Soft and tender in your arms
And warm as summertime
Set with sweet and endless charms
Endearing and sublime

They gurgle, chuckle, pout and cry
Throughout each passing day
Joyful in their cots they lie
To ease the time away

They, the future of this earth
Bring hope for everyone
Celebrate each baby`s birth
Each daughter and each son

Little hearts yet meek and mild
So innocent and pure
O to live life as a child
Who`er could ask for more

Comments about Little Hearts by Valerie Dohren

  • Kayode Peter Ogunleye (11/8/2017 4:51:00 AM)

    Really love this, children are so innocent and pure at their tender age. We need bring them up in Godly and good they can grow to really express their real human nature and not been enculturize with through socialization which tend to bring either positive or a negative change on there life.
    I support the social and mental development of a child towards self discovery and actualization.
    God bless
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    Valerie Dohren (11/8/2017 12:33:00 PM)

    Thank you for reading and commenting. Very much appreciated.

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  • (7/13/2012 8:10:00 PM)

    Absolutely lovely. Goes to the core. Could feel the rhythm and purity, as well, of this timeless piece. (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/13/2012 6:24:00 PM)

    Meticulously depictive and as popetically warming as freshly baked bread...I am sure that I have said this before, but I feel compelled to reiterate the fact that you have a darting penchant for structure/metre, which as you know sets the stage for your work to be read as you would recite it... Superb write, young lady! ~FjR~ (Report) Reply

  • (7/13/2012 11:55:00 AM)

    Another wonderful poem from a wonder-filled writer! (Report) Reply

  • Juan Olivarez (7/13/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, children are angels in disguise. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (7/13/2012 1:14:00 AM)

    So cute. Loved the subject-matter and the style of writing as well. (Report) Reply

  • (7/12/2012 4:46:00 PM)

    hi valerie, this whipped away the years for me back to my first looks at the tiny little souls id just made...lovely (Report) Reply

  • (7/12/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    A treat to read on the truths of children and the pleasure we get from new born babies and you delicately paint the pictures of them so sweet...luvli...regards (Report) Reply

  • (7/7/2012 10:43:00 PM)

    This gentle write is a perfect representation of new borns, their dependece on our love, our future. (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (7/7/2012 9:23:00 PM)

    You somehow captured the magic and essense of birth
    and parenthood with this poem. Feel it write it. Perfect.
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  • Kasia Fedyk (7/7/2012 11:18:00 AM)

    Valerie, the sweetness of this poem is incredible, the flow and visualization sublime in every way. Just Divine Beautiful! It touches my soul. Thank you! Love and Light (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (7/7/2012 5:09:00 AM)

    So many lovely lines in a delightful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Craig Anderson (7/6/2012 11:49:00 AM)

    Absolutely stunning write felt every word Val. Thank you.
    Regards Craig.
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  • Suvro Bhattacharya (7/6/2012 11:11:00 AM)

    A poem out of a pure heart i believe!
    With deep rooted poetics in the fibre of every word! Phrase!

    Totally nice reading!
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  • Heather Wilson (7/6/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem Val, Little Hearts, I really enjoyed reading it, such a joy. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 6, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, July 6, 2012

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