Lizzie (A Comment On Forgive Me My Lord - By Kostas Lagos) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Lizzie (A Comment On Forgive Me My Lord - By Kostas Lagos)

Rating: 5.0


The increasing distance
between me and my God
has blurred His image,
that was already dim.
I love to believe in Him
and in a life after this life,
but when I think if there was a life
before this life,
I look at my hysterical wife.
I wish there may not be
another butcher
to cut my throat once again
with a rusted knife!
Forgetting all the nonsense debates
I shut the door of my brain
and I open the windows of my heart
to think who was my wife,
in my previous life.
Then starts a parade of beautiful queens in bikinis,
From Lizzie of Shakespeare's time
to the Lizzie of my time,
you can imagine my difficulty to select a Lizzie.
But once it was done
I started praying
My Lord! If you can send me to my future
why can't you send me in the past?
I don't think a few centuries you cannot rewind!

(Wrote this poem in a funny mood.)

Saturday, May 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: timeless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 20 May 2018

Very funny..you made readers laugh So you want to visit your past

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Priyani Lekamwattage 23 December 2019

There is a humour in this poem but I like.

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 June 2018

A thoughtful poem, a wonderful write.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 May 2018

While distance between God and self increases this provokes thought. From Lizzie of Shakespeare's time to the Lizzie of your time we can feel the difficulties. A poem written in funny mood has become good essence for readers. We need close relationship with God. This timeless poem is excellently penned....10

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Ha ha ha..so funny. I concur with Kostas wonderful comment. Beautifully crafted write.10

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Kostas Lagos 20 May 2018

Yes, marriage can be the reason for philosophy and prayer....

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