Loaded Gun Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Loaded Gun

Rating: 5.0


When you load
That damned gun
Don't think 'bout
The damn thief
Don't think 'bout
A killer
A rapist
Or child
Molester

When you load
That damned gun
Don't think 'bout
Politics
President
NRA
Religion
Hypocrites

When you load
That damned gun
Don't think 'bout
Your neighbours
Your good friends
Relatives
Family
Think about
The child
You just killed

Friday, November 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: guilt,guns,hypocrisy,leadership,politics,religion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In memory of all the innocent victims killed by the epidemic of guns.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 26 November 2018

A moving poem that makes you think of the victims. A definite 10.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 November 2018

Richard, such a powerful poem......10+++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 24 November 2018

2. We need to create a kind loving supportive environment for all our children starting in the home, the neighborhood, the school, the town, the county, the state, the nation, and not elect hatred into the government and the White House.. oops- didn't mean to get political here. Great inspirational write here, Richard! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10

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Susan Williams 24 November 2018

A troubled world and a troubled country filled with hatred and cruelty- -the guns make it easier for evil to kill, but take all guns away and they will kill by knives, poison, bombs.

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