Shameem Haider Rao

saharanpur. uttar pardesh
Shameem Haider Rao
saharanpur. uttar pardesh

Lonely

Rating: 3.8
A lonely star in the night
A lonely plant in the desert
A lonely cloud in the sky
A weeping heart in the ocean of happiness
Dry eyes like season of autumn
Loneliness and me sit together, waiting for the moon
Loneliness walk in the fair of world, as beloved of me
A lonely soldier in the war, this is me.

Shameem Haider Rao
Friday, February 21, 2014
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COMMENTS
Naila Rais 13 June 2018
Such a creative write.. Keep it up.. Captures the human behavior..... Surrounded by loneliness... True piece..10 +++ Naila
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Kirti Sharma 21 May 2014
Nice poem... a reader can feel and imagin your loneliness... So true... and so lonely...
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Susan Wall 01 May 2014
i like your poem just wish you would of kept going with it there is alot of potential if you just let your heart let loose and and let the emotions flow. Also thank you for the kind words you left me in the first message, i feel like i am a not that you say i am. Thank you for your kindness.
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Patricia Grantham 30 April 2014
A very descriptive and vivid poem on loneliness. Your feelings expressed so vividly. Enjoyed.
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Well done in your poem So lonely Great Pls comment on my poems
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Zahra Shariat 26 April 2014
Loneliness and me sit together, waiting for the moon, , , it reminds me a Poem from Akbar Eksir : we were 7 ppl, but the traffic police wrote 8 , he told the truth, cuz God was with us too!
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Ruma Chaudhuri 06 April 2014
Beautiful poem. I read it for many times. I like it. Thank you for the sweet poem you shared for us.. Ruma
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Brianna Wahlquist 21 March 2014
i love it.! when you'd messaged me the other day i was going to be very unfair with my judgment, i guess that is only how i am. but this..THIS! this is just amazing and very captive. with the smallest of words, the shortest of lines, you made something more of a bright beach. you see, you made me as a human realize what i already understood, that every thing which is good, can also be desperate, wishful, sorrowful, and yet-still beautiful in the most unique of ways, keep it up friend...!
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Roseann Shawiak 17 March 2014
Great poem. It's as if you were walking along, looking up and noticed a star, walked farther and noticed a plant in the desert. Continuing on, seeing a cloud in the sky. Loneliness weeps into the ocean of happiness to hide the tears. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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Neela Nath Das 14 March 2014
A superb poem on loneliness.Loved.
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