Long Road Poem by Amber Piercy

Long Road

Rating: 4.6


Long road

Beep beep beep
The sound of the monitors wake me from my sleep
I get up from my worn out comfy bed
As I walk down the cold hallway my heart fills with dread
It's nights like this that I should have stoked the fire
If nerves were bricks I could build my own Empire
I crept up to momma's room to do my nightly check
She was softly asleep so I give her cheek a small peck
I look towards Alexander in his hand made bed
I place my delicate hand upon his soft head
His hair is the same shade of brown as mine
If love could turn into honey I would make my own wine
Momma has a long road to recover
She had a few complications after she had my brother
Poppa works twice as hard now down at the mines
But they say God gives you the best signs
Its just that sometimes you have to paint them by hand
It gradually flows through your fingers like sand
But the best blessing is hearing both there hearts beat
With each blip of the monitor the sound is so sweet
I couldn't ask God for a better sound
Especially if it means keeping momma around
So I pray to Jesus tonight to keep them both in a safe place
to hold momma tight with the finest lace
And to keep my brothers breathing strong
Because at home is where they both belong

A.D. Small
December 20,2021

Thursday, June 9, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: family,affinity and love,historical,romance,life,memories,reflection,feelings,happiness,hope,joy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Profound. The most subtle manner in which you present the loved ones, the mother and the brother who are bedridden, is totally astounding. And your nerves of steel, your happiness in their improving health, your prayers for their recovery…

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Part 2. With you solely taking care of them, while another brother " works twice as hard now down at the mines" to find money (maybe for their treatment) … Your positive energy,

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Red Barchettadrive 01 August 2022

These are my favorite lines Amber: 'Poppa works twice as hard now down at the mines But they say God gives you the best signs Its just that sometimes you have to paint them by hand It gradually flows through your fingers like sand...' Well written poet!

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Amber Piercy 05 August 2022

A ww thank you so much for your inciteful comment i greatly appreciate it. This poem is the 3rd one in the series out of a set of 4. They are works of fiction lol but i am so glad you liked my poem thank you.

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Mark Heathcote 25 June 2022

I enjoyed reading your lovely poem Amber, nice one!

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Amber Piercy 13 June 2022

Thank you so much i actually feel like these 3 poems are some of my best pieces i love them so much.

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Part 4. " I couldn't ask God for a better sound"… your devoted love for both of them! I admire you, Amber! ! !

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Part 3. Your positive energy, positive stance and positive state of mind, in a most excruciating situation, is amazing. And your talent in creative so beautiful poetry out of it! ! Top score and Myfavourites..

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Amber Piercy 05 July 2022

Thank you so much you guys i worked very hard on these 3 poems i am so glad that you guys appreciated them.

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