Loss Of Reason Poem by James Timothy Jarrett

Loss Of Reason

Rating: 5.0


In cold and bitter dark

Madness falls like rain

The muddied slopes of reason

Slowly slip away

Gentle momentum

In falling

Gains

And brings the mountain

Tumbling down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 15 October 2008

A small poem that carries a great weight...............10

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Fay Slimm 12 October 2008

Jim your alliteration is really good here, and with the slow pace the piece feel like a slow fall but gaining momentum to affect the proverbial mountain. The subject is dark but very well imaged. Your usual way with words wins out again.10 + from Fay.

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Linda Winchell 10 October 2008

Just enough said and well said at that! 10! Linda

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Sandra J. 10 October 2008

i love the simplicity, yet complexity of this well written piece of art for the soul.

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