Lost Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

Lost

Rating: 5.0


Lost in the swirl of Eddie current,
Mild as dew, mist or just the way ward drop
Born to inspire thirst or quench errant?
Dismal at the turn of event; shall remain to crop?
Green or simply Mango sweet, mellow and yellow?
The winds calling the tune of dance
A mere dancing willow
Shades mufti-color; at a glance
The effect of the brilliant Sun
I so oft in my shyness shun!
It was a war; as if of good and evil
As if it was a war fare civil
Elite minds in table conference to dwindle
The world is bold and it does in Sun's glare shrivel

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 02 September 2012

Outburst of the heart! A reservoir filled with beautiful and touching words along with rich imagery! One more time, Beauty and Talent filtered through this well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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Shahzia Batool 02 September 2012

Malini! you are strong in painting images...

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Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY
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