malini kadir

Rookie - 44 Points (17th october / Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY)

Lost - Poem by malini kadir

Lost in the swirl of Eddie current,
Mild as dew, mist or just the way ward drop
Born to inspire thirst or quench errant?
Dismal at the turn of event; shall remain to crop?
Green or simply Mango sweet, mellow and yellow?
The winds calling the tune of dance
A mere dancing willow
Shades mufti-color; at a glance
The effect of the brilliant Sun
I so oft in my shyness shun!
It was a war; as if of good and evil
As if it was a war fare civil
Elite minds in table conference to dwindle
The world is bold and it does in Sun's glare shrivel


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  • Romeo Della Valle (9/2/2012 12:59:00 PM)


    Outburst of the heart! A reservoir filled with beautiful and touching words along with rich imagery! One more time, Beauty and Talent filtered through this well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City (Report) Reply

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  • Shahzia Batool (9/2/2012 7:40:00 AM)


    Malini! you are strong in painting images... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 2, 2012


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