Lost Poem by Rose Price

Lost

Rating: 3.5


Want to find me
You can't
Want to search me
Don't
I am lost,
I am so lost
in the darkness
where no light seems
to penetrate
Want to help me,
try but it's of no use
I am lost.

Wednesday, July 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: agony
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anonymous still 29 July 2015

Very nice and thoughtful poem....keep writing...thanks for sharing

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Chinedu Dike 08 August 2015

Good depiction of depression and life at its lowest ebb, of one lost in the vast abysses of time and space. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Rose and do remain blessed. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 29 July 2015

A haunting poem, Rose Thanks for sharing Peace

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Allotey Abossey 29 July 2015

Sounds like one who's given up on life.... Seems like all hope is lost... Since there's life, there's hope. Good work my friend

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anonymous still 29 July 2015

Awsome poem...nice work...

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anonymous still 29 July 2015

Very nice poem...keep writing...thanks for sharing

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