Lost My Way Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Lost My Way

Rating: 5.0

I seem to have lost my way,
At this time when I'm turning gray.
Can some one take me home, by the way?

If you ask me which way to go,
I'll tell you sorry, I really don't know!
My head is broiling, with ideas uncoiling, though.

Meek souls all around dampen my spirit too,
Acquiescent and compliant, to whatever they're told to do.
These sacrificial lambs, unaware where they're being led to!

At Aditmari, Lalmonirhat
26 January 2014
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Shama T. Bukhari 22 February 2014

Beautifully penned down.. You know how to play with words... Keep up the good work.. You are a great poet!

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Cassandra Jasmine 06 March 2014

Beautifully crafted! 10 here as well!

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Khairul Ahsan 06 March 2014

@Sandra Feldman, You've really moved me, by your appreciative words, on my poem. With the circumstances prevailing all around, home and abroad, I feel totally lost at times. You have rightly caught the mood, I am so keen to find my way! I cannot adequately reciprocate your appreciative words. You are kind and generous. Thanks for the 10/10.

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Mary Forrester 26 February 2014

Beautiful poem Khairul, I rate this a 10.

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Goldheart Bird 11 March 2014

Beutiful poem! I really enjoyed it a 10 from me! :)

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Khairul Ahsan 12 August 2018

Thank you @Goldheart Bird, for reading my poem and rating it so generously! I've just read your poem - 'Books' and left my comment there.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 March 2014

@Cassandra Jasmine Thanks for your appreciative words. Thanks for the generous 10. Am glad you liked it.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 March 2014

@Mary Forrester Thanks for the kind words and the generous 10. Am inspired.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 March 2014

@Shama T. Bukhari Thank you so much for reading my poem. Thanks for the comment. Much obliged for the kind words.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 March 2014

@All those readers who made a comment below: With great surprise I have noticed that some one has disliked all my comments I made in response to my readers' ones. Curious to know who this well wisher could be!

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