Looking Up From Down Under Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Looking Up From Down Under

Rating: 5.0


Looking Up From Down Under

We lie on the bosom of the green grass,
Beside the walkways,
Trodden by careless feet,
Ignored by eyes that seek no beauty,
Forgotten by even the few that look at us,
Yet, we keep smiling till death!

We look up to you,
From down under,
To see you smile too
As you pass by.

(Picture taken by my iphone i7, on 04 April 2022, at 11: 21 am)

Melbourne, Australia
04 May 2022

Looking Up From Down Under
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I met these beautiful flowers during my morning walks around the vicinity of where I am staying now. I have written the poem on their behalf, as my feelings dictated me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Loved your poem. We should have eyes that can see the beauty and smile of the flowers.

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The flowers love it if you look at them and admire them. You know the language of flowers dear Khairul Sahab. Super Poem that deserves top score

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 May 2022

IF I amy say dear Khairul, Down Under is a country with many true dry ground, the atmosphere is oft hot and the seasons in Down Under are the reverse. Winter in Europe is Summer in Down Under. The people are kind and nice.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 May 2022

How loveliest and sweet of you to create a poem on their behalf. You are there on vacantion, I think and then you keep thinking of these field flowers and a poem booms up, WOW! The true poet I adore,5 Stars for this prettiest look. That is Top Score and myriad more

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Nabakishore Dash 05 May 2022

Nice and ideal write with a good graphic.

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Beautiful poem. It is a rare gift to be able to see and enjoy the beauty in things, that most of us ignore. You have that gift. Top score.

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Congratulations for having this poem selected as Poem Of The Day! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 May 2022

Beautiful... beautifully composed. Top score.

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A beautiful poem with vivid images. Very touching. Liked the underlying message of this well expressed poem. To my Poem List.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 May 2022

A beautiful poem.... many congratulations! !

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