Sunday, December 21, 2008

Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

We should cherish and treasure the presence
Of love amongst our world, for it is the
Spectacular view of a beautiful sunset
Upon a mid-summers dust.
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Lisa Anderson 02 February 2009

oh my god i like this poem and it reminhds me of how i am so in loive right now

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Fred Romo 05 January 2009

'We should cherish and treasure the presence Of love amongst our world, for it is the Spectacular view of a beautiful sunset Upon a mid-summers dust' Wow...fantastic wording & expression, I actually printed this stanza out & have it on my wall of quotes. Great job! !

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Eric Adams 04 January 2009

beautful to the end

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Beth Hunt 30 December 2008

This is my fav of all poems so far. I'm more about the light and the spring but I can appreciate your dark side as well. Keep writing!

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MuRdA RhEE 29 December 2008

Good Writing Dan....

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gabrielle amorette 25 December 2008

hey, Dan, thnx 4 the comment btw, and i like these. especially love and zombies in the graveyard. twas very kewl. i hope you write more annd learn, love, and grow as a poet, a writer and a mastermind. any one can write a poem, but it takes a genius to make it worth while and meaningful. best to you. Merry Christmas Dan.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 December 2008

Beautiful words and thoughts on love. Well done Dan!

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Maxim Muyu 23 December 2008

great writing on love.

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Maxim Muyu 23 December 2008

great writing on love.

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Bradley Kellum 21 December 2008

I am jealous of this poem. It is an excellent description of love. I would love to be able to view love with your mind. I see it very differently than that.Whether you have been severly hurt by love or not is irrelevant because in your poem you show love for what is at its core. Instead of allowing the pain that usually accompanies love to flow into the poem like most do. Well written.

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Ivor Hogg 21 December 2008

love is indded all of these things and more

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Desiree Burdick 21 December 2008

you describe love very well

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Shilesha Johnson 21 December 2008

i loved the way you worded everything. a completely different yet great way of expressing what so many find it hard to. LOVE. this was a awesome poem. i loved it. a 10 for me! ! ! !

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C.R. Clark 21 December 2008

A very good write indeed. It's true what they say 'love makes the world go around.' thanks for sharing this one, poet friend. Richard

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Emily Oldham 21 December 2008

A beautiful poem full of passion and emotion... keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Raindreamer Hippy 21 December 2008

well written, sweet, and passionate. It''s amazing.

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Bob Blackwell 21 December 2008

Nice write Dan, in fact love is everything that is good 10

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Sarah Sisson 21 December 2008

That is so sweet and loving...thank you for this one!

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