We should cherish and treasure the presence
Of love amongst our world, for it is the
Spectacular view of a beautiful sunset
Upon a mid-summers dust.
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'We should cherish and treasure the presence Of love amongst our world, for it is the Spectacular view of a beautiful sunset Upon a mid-summers dust' Wow...fantastic wording & expression, I actually printed this stanza out & have it on my wall of quotes. Great job! !
This is my fav of all poems so far. I'm more about the light and the spring but I can appreciate your dark side as well. Keep writing!
hey, Dan, thnx 4 the comment btw, and i like these. especially love and zombies in the graveyard. twas very kewl. i hope you write more annd learn, love, and grow as a poet, a writer and a mastermind. any one can write a poem, but it takes a genius to make it worth while and meaningful. best to you. Merry Christmas Dan.
I am jealous of this poem. It is an excellent description of love. I would love to be able to view love with your mind. I see it very differently than that.Whether you have been severly hurt by love or not is irrelevant because in your poem you show love for what is at its core. Instead of allowing the pain that usually accompanies love to flow into the poem like most do. Well written.
i loved the way you worded everything. a completely different yet great way of expressing what so many find it hard to. LOVE. this was a awesome poem. i loved it. a 10 for me! ! ! !
A very good write indeed. It's true what they say 'love makes the world go around.' thanks for sharing this one, poet friend. Richard
A beautiful poem full of passion and emotion... keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***
oh my god i like this poem and it reminhds me of how i am so in loive right now