Love Poem by Craig Mize

Love



Listen and feel my words

Understand me like you hear the birds

Feel me like you feel the wind

And then again you never do

Do you see do you really realize who I be

When I was, when I came, when I left

Just cus just cause you did not care

If you really love me would you still be there

Would you still be here

I have no more fear so I see none

Everybody know I never played but always won

And I still lost in this game of life

And that was my ultimate sacrifice

Love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iris Rain 19 June 2010

Everybody know I never played but always won And I still lost in this game of life And that was my ultimate sacrifice Love. Such a great use of contrast. I like the strong statement and sentiment. Love, can be ironic and confusing, Another facet of love, expressed from the writer's point of view. Excellent write

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Gita Ashok 07 June 2010

Understand me like you hear the birds Feel me like you feel the wind Lovely.

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Craig Mize

Craig Mize

gainesville GA
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