A rose
in a bush of thorns!
Simple and true! I like the exclamation point. It adds force to the words. I think without it..the poem would read entirely different. Hope this not just me stating the obvious
great poem, but I think it does not capture the multiple colours of love. that is the problem of oversimplification-emma oduro
Once you get past the pretty, you eventually get pricked... lol Short and sweet... Good job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Does Rose refer a Beautiful Girl and the Thorns her parents?