Love, love, love
Everythings' above.
Needs faith and care
Betwixt the pairs.
Unites the families,
Defeat the enemies.
Everyone has studied in tales
'The love for rose, of Nightingale.'
It's a beautiful Gift of God
Which has come from far abode.
Short, simple and lovely. Keep on writing it will improve your craft of writing poetry
A very good poem by a lovely poetess who has poured down her heart in it expressing her emotion. A good write indeed
again very simple but with profound meaning.... one humble suggestion, try to pen new themes and subjects.... poetry is an art abducted has to be tackles artistically..... you quite new but I m sure will do better..... b4 posting any of your expressions, revisit your composition again and again till get satisfied....... it's like a painting, needs few touches and light strokes even after completion......
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
simple yet very effective dear. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s