Love Poem by Zeenat Fatima


Rating: 2.8

Love, love, love
Everythings' above.
Needs faith and care
Betwixt the pairs.
Unites the families,
Defeat the enemies.
Everyone has studied in tales
'The love for rose, of Nightingale.'
It's a beautiful Gift of God
Which has come from far abode.

Abhimanyu Kumar.s 16 September 2012

simple yet very effective dear. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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Asif Andalib 22 November 2012

Short, simple and lovely. Keep on writing it will improve your craft of writing poetry

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Zeenat Fatima 18 September 2012

thanx friends for ur comments...

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Mohammad Muzzammil 16 November 2014

A very good poem by a lovely poetess who has poured down her heart in it expressing her emotion. A good write indeed

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Aman Sa 18 January 2013

Concrete effort from a very young poet. Keep writing.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 30 December 2012

simple and awesome poem of love

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Vijay Sai R 29 December 2012

a wonderful poem on love...

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Xelam Kan™ 29 December 2012

again very simple but with profound meaning.... one humble suggestion, try to pen new themes and subjects.... poetry is an art abducted has to be tackles artistically..... you quite new but I m sure will do better..... b4 posting any of your expressions, revisit your composition again and again till get satisfied....... it's like a painting, needs few touches and light strokes even after completion......

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