Love Poem by Baharak Barzin

Love

Rating: 4.9


Can you ever feel my feelings?
That
I'm burning inside in your love
This innocent love calls you
And you ignore it
Ignite my soul
And you'll see the pieces of my heart crying for you
Sharpen your ignorance and hurt me
And you'll see my soul flying to you
I love you
And love you
Ignite my soul again
and you'll see my love wailing for you
Let my earthen body die down for you
And you'll see my soul flying to you
I love you
And love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 27 December 2014

A well articulated love poem written from the inner recesses of the heart to capture the depth of love felt. A nice piece of poetry, do keep it up and thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 January 2016

This innocent love calls you And you ignore it Ignite my soul And you'll see the pieces of my heart crying for you and you will see my soul flying for u. what a lovely expression of love. thank you dear poetess. thank you. tony

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Siddartha Montik 03 December 2016

Truly expressive.. almost wondered the simple three words I love you can be said in many ways and many touching Lines..! Thank you for sharing.10+++

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Terrance Mawanga 01 May 2015

A beautiful poem on love. Keep on the poetic brilliance.

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Terrance Mawanga 01 May 2015

A beautiful piece of poetry. Keep up the poetic flair.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 03 July 2018

Lovely craft work..I vote 10++

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 January 2018

This innocent love calls you And you ignore it Ignite my soul And you'll see the pieces of my heart crying for you. a great love poem full of romantic feelings.... love ur poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Daniel Brick 26 April 2017

This poem is by a poet completely free of guile and vanity. If she were a colleague at work, she would be reliable and pleasant. If she were a friend, she would be a delight to spend time with and also someone to confide in. If she were a sister, she would develop a life-long closeness as a sibling. But she is a free person offering a love relationship. What a blessing to the man she has freely chosen. If he has achieved maturity and displays similar virtues, this is romantic love of the highest quality. Need I add it has every hallmark of a relationship that will grow and flower over time? Your poem expresses idealism and practicality in equal measures.

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James Mclain 28 December 2016

Feeling's when fence cause such a fire Does he not know how you feel? If he does not let him know and barring Something unforseen you should know? .. James.. iip

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Sylvaonyema Uba 12 December 2016

A nice poem. it is good to be in love. Thanks for sharing with us. Sylva Onyema Uba

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