Baharak Barzin


Love - Poem by Baharak Barzin

Can you ever feel my feelings?
That
I'm burning inside in your love
This innocent love calls you
And you ignore it
Ignite my soul
And you'll see the pieces of my heart crying for you
Sharpen your ignorance and hurt me
And you'll see my soul flying to you
I love you
And love you
Ignite my soul again
and you'll see my love wailing for you
Let my earthen body die down for you
And you'll see my soul flying to you
I love you
And love you

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  • Daniel Brick (4/26/2017 7:11:00 AM)


    This poem is by a poet completely free of guile and vanity. If she were a colleague at work, she would be reliable and pleasant. If she were a friend, she would be a delight to spend time with and also someone to confide in. If she were a sister, she would develop a life-long closeness as a sibling. But she is a free person offering a love relationship. What a blessing to the man she has freely chosen. If he has achieved maturity and displays similar virtues, this is romantic love of the highest quality. Need I add it has every hallmark of a relationship that will grow and flower over time? Your poem expresses idealism and practicality in equal measures. (Report) Reply

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  • James Mclain Is It Poetry (12/28/2016 12:50:00 PM)


    Feeling's when fence cause such a fire
    Does he not know how you feel?
    If he does not let him know and barring
    Something unforseen you should know? .. James.. iip
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  • Sylva-onyema Uba (12/12/2016 4:40:00 PM)

    Love
    A nice poem. it is good to be in love. Thanks for sharing with us. Sylva Onyema Uba (Report) Reply

  • Siddartha Montik (12/3/2016 4:11:00 AM)

    Beautiful Love Poem!
    Truly expressive.. almost wondered the simple three words I love you can be said in many ways and many touching Lines..! Thank you for sharing.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (11/12/2016 4:24:00 PM)

    Love
    A Wonderfully poetic poem.++++10

    Robert
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/1/2016 3:30:00 AM)


    This innocent love calls you
    And you ignore it
    Ignite my soul
    And you'll see the pieces of my heart crying for you and you will see my soul flying for u. what a lovely expression of love. thank you dear poetess. thank you. tony
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  • (5/1/2015 12:07:00 PM)


    A beautiful piece of poetry. Keep up the poetic flair. (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2015 12:05:00 PM)


    A beautiful poem on love. Keep on the poetic brilliance. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (12/27/2014 12:57:00 AM)


    A well articulated love poem written from the inner recesses of the heart to capture the depth of love felt. A nice piece of poetry, do keep it up and thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX. (Report) Reply

  • Sina Farajzadeh (7/7/2014 7:14:00 AM)


    Another love poem I read this day. Hope this love would be a lifelong one. Best wishes. (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2012 6:11:00 AM)


    Words touch on the soul nature of love (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 31, 2012


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