*love* Poem by Rebecca Navarre

*love*

Rating: 5.0

So cautiously looking around,
searching for a step that's sound.
Don't wanna fall, when I'm already
down.The sun is shinning so brightly
on the ground. It was a lifetime ago
I looked into your eyes and knew my
heart was found. You reached out
and took my hand, but now the skies
forever hold your crown. And I know
no matter how many days I walk this
earth, I won't ever find. The kind of
beauty your eyes held when they
shinned, so golden brown.

Friday, March 7, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: eternity,life,death,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To my Momma Pat, with love who took me under wing at age 8. Adopting one another. And her pup Willie.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2025

Each and every line is so heartwarming depicting the great love of your Momma and your eternal love for her. So beautifully written and expressed. Very touching.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2025

What a wonderful tribute to your beloved Momma Pat. So heartfelt and lovingly penned.

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Anjandev Roy 08 March 2025

This is just wonderful....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 March 2025

Rebecca this would touch Momma Pat Bravo! ! !

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Rob Lamberton 07 March 2025

"they shinned, so golden brown." I love the eyes of poetry!

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