Love Poem by mona martinez
Love
what is love?
do anybody every know?
they say it when you feel a certain way,
how do you know it's love,
when you can't stop thinking about,
the other person?
when your heart skips a beat,
i'll tell you what i think it is,
it when you find that one special person,
the one that knows you,
a way nobody else does,
that part you hide from people,
the side the ywill accept,
only cuz it makes up,
who you really are,
it's a part that seperates you,
from other girls,
the part that says,
this is me, so accept it,
love is not where you love part of someone,
but all of them.
Copyright © 2009
8-10-09
I forgot to tell you where you have grammar errors. 'do anybody every know? they say it when you feel a certain way' the correct way is ' does anybody ever know? they say its when you feel a certain way' i hope ur not thinking im being cheeky and rude, just wanted to help out :) feel free to be honest about my poems :)
Wow, this is such a true and inspiring poem to all those who wish to find their one true love. Tyrone is that person to me. Everything that you've put into this poem like emotion, such feelings, thoughts, and also the things that seperate you from any other woman this man has seen..such a great poem, you keep writing and i'll keep reading. ~ Hazel G.E
LOove is a breathe of life.We can still live without love, but a handicapped.
Hello Mona.. haven't heard from you recently... Still expressing yourself through poems good.. you raise lots of questions here.. you are not the only person, who ask these kind of questions.. I mean lots of people do at least in some point in their lives. good indeed.. hey I can think of dozens of love songs to quote for you, lolss .. this is good lovess shan
Hello Mona.. haven't heard from you recently... Still expressing yourself through poems good.. you raise lots of questions here.. you are not the only person, who ask these kind of questions.. I mean lots of people do at least in some point in their lives. good indeed.. hey I can think of dozens of love songs to quote for you, lolss .. this is good lovess shan
Hello Mona.. haven't heard from you recently... Still expressing yourself through poems good.. you raise lots of questions here.. you are not the only person, who ask these kind of questions.. I mean lots of people do at least in some point in their lives. good indeed.. hey I can think of dozens of love songs to quote for you, lolss .. this is good lovess shan
really opens up what woman see of love... hidden depths thank you
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You have good ideas in this poem but there are quite a few grammar mistakes and i think you could have written it alot better as i dont think you made the subject strong enough, perhaps use some imagery words and metaphors, add colour to your writing :) i hope that was a helpful comment :) please dont hesitate to tell me what you think of my poems, my newest one is called ' Clustered in the clouds ' thanx :)