Love And Lust Comments

very thoughtful comparision of love and - it is a little long perhaps you could improve it by condensing it a little maybe turn into several interlinked poems

Yes, love and are diagonally opposite feelings.While love is positive energy, is negative.The day takes over love, love will die under its shadow.

Just seeing this in 2025....This is OLD but GOLD

A very clever and observational poem by a very intelligent poet. Thank You

But I have to recognise the profound hurt experienced or endured and I am also sorry.

I love the shift and variations you bring in. Many aspects resonate with me, although this partly appears to me as a fever dream of Sigmund Freud. Very long, very black&white, both poles might be a continuum, mustn't be criminal, in my view. An artistic stare into the eyes of power vs. love 4/5

When a poem is this long it often becomes repetitive and I loose interest. This held my attention to the very end. Very well written.

Well done! love will always win over .

very nice

Excellent job comparing the two in so many ways. That had to have been difficult! But you did it very well Big thumbs up! 👍👍

I can't speak from a male point of view, but the drive behind isn't always a selfish concept NOR does it make one evil either. As long as others aren't hurt in the process or affected. Lust doesn'tnecessarily meanbetrayal-.it depends on circumstance.

A flowery write and beautiful juxtaposition of both. If I may ask, what does these lines from the poem mean, 'My subject is my subject. Such enveloping my subject'? .

Nicely written, made me think at every line.

Is it a poem by any standards to be featured here? ? ? ? ? ?

But if you mind can you check on mine too

This thing is cute and also true

Wonderful poem full of wisdom. Fine work!

Jazib! I so much love your poem. Bravo bro

CONGRATS YOU FINALLY MADE YOUR POEM TO THE TOPPERS LIST

This is a dualistic clarity. Very well expressed. Thank you Jazib.