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Love During The War

Rating: 4.7

Fallen from the stairs
After a goodbye kiss

To fulfil her wish
He tried all his tricks

Later, his mission was even bigger
What he did was accidentally triggered

In the enemy's country ~ he was

Hopelessly lost where helplessly cold
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Friday, September 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired while watching a silent movie ofBuster Keaton The General (1926) .
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juhaina Tumlu 25 September 2020

Excellent poem.... The stars silently watched the love on earth One in other's arm far from all worries When the final fires cracked to announce victory Both the hearts were entwined in Love of one another

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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 September 2020

Good poem. Love forged in war. They will be together till death because they know pain

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Suzon Albert 26 September 2020

Yes love has nothing to do with the surroundings even during the what time it can emerge in anybody is hard and surround them with the magic and love

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2020

There was appearance and disappearance. But love was still glowing. War was not the obstacle and love was searching for solace. Love risen in the heart brought up beauty and sensation. An amazing poem is shared here...5 stars!

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Suresh Kumar Ek 26 September 2020

Love and war of emotions Powerfully painted

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Khairul Ahsan 25 September 2020

The poem portrays a nice imagery. 'Both the hearts were entwined in Love of one another' - the concluding line couldn't have been better!

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Varsha M 25 September 2020

Yes indeed this happen. Very beautifully penned and understood.

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