Love Bubbles...... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love Bubbles......

Rating: 4.8


Love you are like a bubble

If you burst will spill trouble

Like clouds you float on air

Just look for mountain and beware

So long you are dry you shall float in sky

With heaviness you will fall

Your fate will be decided by air

Whether to take you to the farmland or to any wetland,

Remember dry earth will absorb you,

mountain will slide you

With river you will lose identity,

If you are fortunate you will fall in sea

Then people will write success story about thee,

Love I want to see that you become SEA…..

Saturday, September 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 27 February 2016

Great write man, loved your creativity.

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Navod Dilhara 27 February 2016

A poem written binding some facts about the nature!

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2015

Nice work! With the muse of love and pain; along the ways of life.

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T Rajan Evol 12 September 2015

Love I want to see that you become SEA….. Great thoughts.........A bubble with great imagery 10/10

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