M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,715 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Love Bubbles...... - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love you are like a bubble

If you burst will spill trouble

Like clouds you float on air

Just look for mountain and beware

So long you are dry you shall float in sky

With heaviness you will fall

Your fate will be decided by air

Whether to take you to the farmland or to any wetland,

Remember dry earth will absorb you,

mountain will slide you

With river you will lose identity,

If you are fortunate you will fall in sea

Then people will write success story about thee,

Love I want to see that you become SEA…..

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Love Bubbles...... by M. Asim Nehal

  • (2/27/2016 1:26:00 AM)


    Great write man, loved your creativity. (Report) Reply

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  • Navod Dilhara (2/27/2016 12:58:00 AM)


    A poem written binding some facts about the nature! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/16/2015 5:38:00 AM)


    Nice work! With the muse of love and pain; along the ways of life. (Report) Reply

  • (9/12/2015 5:18:00 AM)


    Love I want to see that you become SEA….. Great thoughts.........A bubble with great imagery 10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 12, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 12, 2015


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