Mai Venn


Love Lost - Poem by Mai Venn

Swiftly they took over


As the victims fell,


This was to be a fun night,


But became a living hell.





The hall it was crowded


With the spirited and young,


They were launching out in life,


Their time had just begun.





It was to be a good night


As the rock band played,


Merciless gunmen invaded,


The young, they were slain.





There’s no excuse for massacre,


No matter who they are,


Innocent and young people


Who came from wide and far.





Such loss is so very painful


On loved ones as they grieve,


The sorrow forever lingers


For lives never again retrieved.

Topic(s) of this poem: death

Form: Ballad


Comments about Love Lost by Mai Venn

  • Fabrizio Frosini (12/7/2015 2:52:00 PM)


    dear Mai,
    if you wish, you can post your poem ''The Music Stopped'' on this web-site, also.
    Your poem will be published in our ebook ''POETRY AGAINST TERROR'', but being it a free ebook (when published at Smashwords) , there is no problem with posting it here.
    Cheers
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/29/2015 8:32:00 AM)


    This is really such a sad ink on the Paris massacre. We are with families and friends of people who lost their lives. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/24/2015 4:26:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem drafted and shared with amazing view of death. Interesting sharing.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2015



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