Love Lost Hearts Comments

Their souls strained and their wings sliced....How can a couple do to their own children..very touching10 and more stars Thank you

i got to know that signing any contract would meant a lot, forever.........a lifetime to accept what is beyond the pages of the paper... you woke me up, in your poem... a 10 point.....good, thank you

Well write... The Grief and sufferings is natural companions for love. Tsira

love was excitement when it struck me first and became a fever by spring time by autumn it was an incurable malady by winter i was decapitated by it

You said it true, how easy it is to suddenly bond and then break that bond these days. Sad story of the times, but the kids... that is surely the saddest part! Well expressed!

A genuine love may not be lost on egos!

a constructive belief in self expressed in flowery words....good poem

exactly, rema...love has no place where ego reigns... good theme...good attempt