Love Lost Hearts Poem by Rema Prasanaa

Love Lost Hearts

Rating: 4.8


Love Lost Hearts
By Rema Prasanna


Love lost hearts....
finalized one deal
on a legal bond sheet
one escape
an effortless one
lost love dissolved
belongings divided
on ended deals
fights not a base
lifeless items don’t react
but the reactive children
their tears, one task to wipe
their souls strained
and their wings sliced
love, failed and lost on egos

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 27 April 2008

exactly, rema...love has no place where ego reigns... good theme...good attempt

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 05 May 2008

a constructive belief in self expressed in flowery words....good poem

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Subbaraman N V 12 May 2008

A genuine love may not be lost on egos!

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Indira Renganathan 19 August 2008

Their souls strained and their wings sliced....How can a couple do to their own children..very touching10 and more stars Thank you

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Antonio Liao 29 July 2008

i got to know that signing any contract would meant a lot, forever.........a lifetime to accept what is beyond the pages of the paper... you woke me up, in your poem... a 10 point.....good, thank you

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Tsira Goge 19 June 2008

Well write... The Grief and sufferings is natural companions for love. Tsira

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anurag duggal 08 June 2008

love was excitement when it struck me first and became a fever by spring time by autumn it was an incurable malady by winter i was decapitated by it

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

You said it true, how easy it is to suddenly bond and then break that bond these days. Sad story of the times, but the kids... that is surely the saddest part! Well expressed!

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