Oh it's so easy to say -
'Give what you think you lack -
You feel unloved? Then give love, and love, and love...'...
On the other hand -
Do you have any better advice?
Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and subtly penned with conviction. A lovely piece of poetry bristling with insight. A powerful message indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.10/10.
It had me at "do you have any better advice?? "A perfect rhetorical question that clearly elaborates non is fulfilling as love, great work
lol I'm not sure I'd want any more advice from them Michael. Love how you've played this short ;)
Lovely message If you feel unloved try to giving love instead of waiting for it, it's like the old saying you can't pour from an empty cup fill it by giving in the others hand give what you want to receive
Good poem. But not worth to be reckoned among the Best Poems at all. PoemHunter should remove it from the BestPoemsList
This poem brought a smile to my face. It's wise advice as if you give love, you'll be loved in return in most instances but it neglected to say that if you keep loving, when love isn't returned, then stop and find other friends.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An insightful piece on love elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction.