Love Of My Life Poem by Rini Shibu

Love Of My Life

Rating: 5.0


Opened my window to see the beauty of nature
Beams of light fell on my face
Birds were singing
Chilling breeze touched me softly
He kissed me on my neck
Looked into my eyes and whispered sweetie I love u
Running his fingers through my hairs
He made me to sit on his lap
I was lost, same as he
I don't know how to explain
Is that heaven on earth
Is that all girls longing for
I melted in him by then.

Love Of My Life
Saturday, May 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 09 May 2017

He kissed me on my neck Looked into my eyes and whispered sweetie I love u i melted in him...... again again this theme of the mystery of love come in so many poems in poemhunter. blessed are u that you could experience such a love. if it remains like that without loosing its fineness then you are lucky. very often so many begin like this, then they lose the fire, intimacy..........that is the experience... tony

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Rini Shibu 09 May 2017

Dr.Tony love is endless if it's true from heart. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 May 2017

Love and dreams! ! ! With the beauty of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 August 2018

He kissed me on my neck Looked into my eyes and whispered sweetie I love u.....you are really a modern queen romantic verses! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 July 2018

A poem on love with romantic expression beautifully executed.

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi Rini, I don't know how to explain Is that heaven on earth Is that all girls longing for I melted in him by then True, Love is beyond all definitions. A lovely 100+++

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Beyond words.. Thanks

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Genova Maaa 23 October 2017

I was lost, same as he I don't know how to explain Is that heaven on earth....very fine love poem dear poetess Rini.. may ur love last............

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Rini Shibu 23 October 2017

Thanks Tony for visiting this poem.. Rini

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Mark Otieno 23 August 2017

Romantic poem....falling in love is a magical experience love it

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