Patricia Grantham

Gold Star - 6,582 Points (Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

Love Potion - Poem by Patricia Grantham

Love has cast a spell on me
Drowning in its deep blue sea
Mesmerized by a love so true
Fresh and sweet as the morning dew

True love will last forever
Will never ever say no
None can even try to sever
Only meant to grow and grow

My love for you will never die
It was made just for you and I
Our love and trust will always be
Love has cast a spell on me

Copyright 2013

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Love Potion by Patricia Grantham

  • (8/26/2013 1:10:00 PM)

    Mesmerized by a love so true\Fresh and sweet as Morning Dew\True love will last forever\Will never say no. I love the imagery your poem evokes. Achingly beautiful. A perfect ten! (Report) Reply

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  • (7/26/2013 1:34:00 PM)

    A mesmerizing poem. Brief and nearly hynotic in presentation. The comments should tell you.
    Love has cast a spell on me-great line. Someone is very lucky
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  • Valerie Dohren (7/16/2013 3:12:00 PM)

    A poem full of love - delightful write. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/15/2013 11:32:00 PM)

    A lovely potion which I have drunk to the lees! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Sj Holland (7/15/2013 4:25:00 PM)

    I like the identical 1st/last lines. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (7/15/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    Love casts a spell that we are all under from time to time. A good write. (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (7/12/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    so romantically penned.true love and true lover will be last for eachothers.although the aging or time separates them.
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  • Neela Nath Das (7/4/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    Wow! So nice thought! Love and love. (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (7/3/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    Let the spell of love last for long as in true love nothing is impossible Patricia. (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2013 11:45:00 AM)

    Well penned poem, love all the way.
    Siya_! !
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  • (6/23/2013 10:34:00 AM)

    Love Potion is a beautiful poem which every one can relate to.! The rhyming is music to the ears.a wonder ful poem Patricia! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/19/2013 4:51:00 PM)

    True love will last forever
    Nicely stated. Love never dies. Thank you.
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  • Heather Wilkins (6/19/2013 4:09:00 PM)

    love has cast a spell on me. nice thought. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (6/19/2013 5:06:00 AM)

    Love is a many splendid thing, as the song goes. This is a lovely poem and would make a good sonnet to if you chose to write one. Have you read any of my sonnets? (Report) Reply

  • Passionate Reader (6/18/2013 1:17:00 PM)

    My love for you will never die
    It was made just for you and I
    Our love and trust will forever be
    Love has cast a spell on me

    beautiful lines! ! ! yes love works like magic and casts a spell... enjoyable poem! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Valerie Dohren (6/18/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    Delightful little poem Patricia - gave me an ah moment. (Report) Reply

  • (6/17/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    Love has cast a spell on me, cos' your worth it...luvli to read nothing in the planet as good as true love. Even birds
    have it and the pet dog too all true...regards
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/16/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    True love will last forever. Beautiful love poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    Awesome, check out Stardust. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 22, 2015

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