Weeping willows sigh
lovers stroll around small pond
he kisses her hand.
Good sense is applied and feelings have been brought well. May you read mine Cleopatra's glory
very nicely done. I personally do not understand Haiku's, I mean I know they are three lines 575 but to me most i read make no sense this was very good I can imagine that. I give you 10
'This stimulated my imagination and left me with a picturesque scene and I just love weeping willows so it has to have top marks! Karin Anderson
Fine landscape with graceful passages. It is very good, Jim.10... Best wishes, Tsira
Timeless charm. You are a fine imagist. And thank you for liking my poem as well. Kindest regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so romantic! good piece... :)