Weeping willows sigh
lovers stroll around small pond
he kisses her hand.
very nicely done. I personally do not understand Haiku's, I mean I know they are three lines 575 but to me most i read make no sense this was very good I can imagine that. I give you 10
Good sense is applied and feelings have been brought well. May you read mine Cleopatra's glory
'This stimulated my imagination and left me with a picturesque scene and I just love weeping willows so it has to have top marks! Karin Anderson
Fine landscape with graceful passages. It is very good, Jim.10... Best wishes, Tsira
Timeless charm. You are a fine imagist. And thank you for liking my poem as well. Kindest regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Weeping Willows sigh....that's magic Jim....top 10..*dc*