Love $truck Poem by tanvi damle

Love $truck

Rating: 3.4


I promise myself that I'm not gonna talk to you at all,
but then why do I keep waiting for your call?
I convince myself that you nothing to me mean,
but then why do I of you every night dream?
I know you're never gonna stop by,
but then why do I keep waiting to say hi?
I tell myself that now its never gonna be the same,
but then why does my heart skip a beat on hearing your name?
It's over, I've moved on I say,
but then why do I find it so hard to walk away?
I promise myself that i won't see you much,
but then why do my eyes still for you search?
I tell myself that everything between us was not just right,
but then why do I think of you every night?
I promise to move on, leave everything behind,
but why can't I still get you off my mind?
I know you'll never again by my house go,
but then why do I still keep looking out of the window?
I guess I'll always love you deep down in my heart,
there we'll always be together even if we're far apart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akshay B 23 January 2010

awesome! simply awesome so true in many cases

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Adam Reed 23 January 2010

fantastic poem! i think you would like mine called 'i see things'. i think its sort of the same =) anyways great write!

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Peter Strugnell 15 July 2010

can't believe i've never commented on this poem before, your sentiments are beautifully well expressed.It's really precise, no wasted words, i like it. I've just written a poem on the same subject, 'I hate myself' but it's not as poetic as yours! cheers tanvi all the best, be lucky in love

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 06 February 2010

A very fine sharing and expression of true love with associated longing, passion and affection. Beautiful verse reflecting the romance within and the intimacy being enjoyed.

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true Little angel ...! ! ! 06 February 2010

nice.. sweet... love between the tongue of mind and the heart action.... enjoyable.. keep writing

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Lost Poet 02 February 2010

cant stop myself reading dis poem again n again.........................really nice work dear.......... bt grow up n fk dat guy out of ur memories.......may b he dont deserve dat............ do read mah poem..'i hate her...'

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 24 January 2010

Love of a salamander? oooooffffffffff! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The title is misleading. Otherwise I could surely ask: For whom? Where? and When? all advervial questions.. he he he

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