Lovers Bound Poem by Pratikshya Sedhain

Lovers Bound

Rating: 5.0


If you are heart, I wanna be your beat.
If you are cake, I wanna be your sweet.

If you are kite, I wanna be your flight.
If you are dream, I wanna be your night.

If you are guitar, I wanna be your dhun,
If you are star, I wanna be your moon.

If you are metal, I wanna be your shine,
If you are poem, I wanna be your rhyme.

If you are paddy, I wanna be your hay,
If you are light, I wanna be your ray.

If you are rain, I wanna be your moist,
If you are lover, I wanna be your choice.

Monday, June 24, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: boyfriend,love,love and life,relationship,rhyme,rhyme royal
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wanna dedicate this song to my Love...........
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 24 September 2015

If you are star, I wanna be your moon. If you are lover, I wanna be your choice. wonderful comparisons my dear you have lot of imagination. write and do not stop writing. At your age it is marvelous. thank you , tony

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Pratikshya Sedhain 24 December 2015

Thank you.......

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Pratikshya Sedhain 25 December 2015

Thank you....... Dr. Tony Bhahmin

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Chandra Bikram Kunwar 13 September 2014

the rhymes are used beautifully pratiksha!

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Pratikshya Sedhain 20 March 2015

thank you........

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Akhtar Jawad 07 August 2017

Sweet, beautiful and touching; a wonderful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. This is a marvelous poem on love with stunning expression. Each and every line is euphonious to read. I want to quote some lines here... If you are heart, I wanna be your beat. If you are cake, I wanna be your sweet. If you are kite, I wanna be your flight. If you are dream, I wanna be your night. If you are guitar, I wanna be your dhun, If you are star, I wanna be your moon... I appreciate the theme but I couldn't find the meaning of 'dhun' in English Dictionary, ofcourse I have understanding. Many thanks dear Pratikshya, may God nourish your poetic thoughts.

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Bharati Nayak 21 July 2016

If you are heart I wannabe your beat If you are cake I wannabe your sweet If you re kite I wannabe your flight If you are dream i wannabe your flight- -Wow- -Beautiful with rhyme and rhythm and love, thanks for sharing.It is perfect 10

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Gajanan Mishra 30 May 2016

Wonderful love, my dear..

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 11 February 2016

Fantastic lines, enjoyed reading it.

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