If you are heart, I wanna be your beat.
If you are cake, I wanna be your sweet.
If you are kite, I wanna be your flight.
If you are dream, I wanna be your night.
If you are guitar, I wanna be your dhun,
If you are star, I wanna be your moon.
If you are metal, I wanna be your shine,
If you are poem, I wanna be your rhyme.
If you are paddy, I wanna be your hay,
If you are light, I wanna be your ray.
If you are rain, I wanna be your moist,
If you are lover, I wanna be your choice.
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. This is a marvelous poem on love with stunning expression. Each and every line is euphonious to read. I want to quote some lines here... If you are heart, I wanna be your beat. If you are cake, I wanna be your sweet. If you are kite, I wanna be your flight. If you are dream, I wanna be your night. If you are guitar, I wanna be your dhun, If you are star, I wanna be your moon... I appreciate the theme but I couldn't find the meaning of 'dhun' in English Dictionary, ofcourse I have understanding. Many thanks dear Pratikshya, may God nourish your poetic thoughts.
If you are heart I wannabe your beat If you are cake I wannabe your sweet If you re kite I wannabe your flight If you are dream i wannabe your flight- -Wow- -Beautiful with rhyme and rhythm and love, thanks for sharing.It is perfect 10
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I would like to translate this poem
If you are star, I wanna be your moon. If you are lover, I wanna be your choice. wonderful comparisons my dear you have lot of imagination. write and do not stop writing. At your age it is marvelous. thank you , tony
Thank you.......
Thank you....... Dr. Tony Bhahmin