Pratikshya Sedhain

Freshman - 754 Points (March 7 1998 / Kathmandu)

Lovers Bound - Poem by Pratikshya Sedhain

If you are heart, I wanna be your beat.
If you are cake, I wanna be your sweet.

If you are kite, I wanna be your flight.
If you are dream, I wanna be your night.

If you are guitar, I wanna be your dhun,
If you are star, I wanna be your moon.

If you are metal, I wanna be your shine,
If you are poem, I wanna be your rhyme.

If you are paddy, I wanna be your hay,
If you are light, I wanna be your ray.

If you are rain, I wanna be your moist,
If you are lover, I wanna be your choice.

Topic(s) of this poem: boyfriend, love, love and life, relationship, rhyme, rhyme royal


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wanna dedicate this song to my Love...........

Comments about Lovers Bound by Pratikshya Sedhain

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/7/2017 6:03:00 AM)

    Sweet, beautiful and touching; a wonderful poem. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/5/2017 2:38:00 PM)

    Wonderful imaginary and imagery. This is a marvelous poem on love with stunning expression. Each and every line is euphonious to read. I want to quote some lines here...
    If you are heart, I wanna be your beat.
    If you are cake, I wanna be your sweet.

    If you are kite, I wanna be your flight.
    If you are dream, I wanna be your night.

    If you are guitar, I wanna be your dhun,
    If you are star, I wanna be your moon...
    I appreciate the theme but I couldn't find the meaning of 'dhun' in English Dictionary, ofcourse I have understanding. Many thanks dear Pratikshya, may God nourish your poetic thoughts.
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Bharati Nayak (7/21/2016 8:29:00 AM)

    If you are heart I wannabe your beat
    If you are cake I wannabe your sweet
    If you re kite I wannabe your flight
    If you are dream i wannabe your flight- -Wow- -Beautiful with rhyme and rhythm and love, thanks for sharing.It is perfect 10
    (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Gajanan Mishra (5/30/2016 5:55:00 AM)

    Wonderful love, my dear.. (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (2/11/2016 9:28:00 AM)

    Fantastic lines, enjoyed reading it. (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Aabid Masroor (2/11/2016 5:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem love it (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Drtony Brahmin (9/24/2015 12:28:00 AM)

    If you are star, I wanna be your moon.
    If you are lover, I wanna be your choice.
    wonderful comparisons my dear you have lot of imagination. write and do not stop writing. At your age it is marvelous. thank you , tony
    (Report)Reply

    (12/25/2015)

    Thank you....... Dr. Tony Bhahmin

    (12/24/2015 11:59:00 PM)

    Thank you.......

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (9/13/2014 4:19:00 AM)

    the rhymes are used beautifully pratiksha! (Report)Reply

    (3/20/2015 12:53:00 AM)

    thank you........

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (9/7/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    Thank to y'all for ur comments................. (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
  • Dr Library @ Debadarshi (9/7/2013 11:04:00 AM)

    Wonderful... Keep it up... (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Alookh (matin) (8/19/2013 8:21:00 AM)

    very very very beautiful poem Pratikshya! i loved the last line... nothing could be better for its end, ... thanx! ! :) (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Indranil Bhaduri (7/25/2013 11:31:00 PM)

    Fantastic poem.. Romantic and intense... Great (Report)Reply

    2 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 15 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags


Poem Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 16, 2015


Famous Poems

  1. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  5. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  6. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  7. Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep
    Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
    Pablo Neruda
  10. Television
    Roald Dahl
[Report Error]