Loves Charge Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Loves Charge

Rating: 5.0


you faced my charge
as though awaiting
the next dance at a ball
arms folded and patient
not even bothering to bare your soul
until I was almost on top of you
then you did dance...
all your grace turned
in an instant, to fluid passion
not standing against me
you carved a path to me
a clear swath
as wide as your heart's reach.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 19 November 2005

You really do have a wonderful descriptive talent in poetry. Wow from me and 10. Tai

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