Lucy In Cinderella Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Lucy In Cinderella

Rating: 5.0


Once some children
Said to Grandmother,
"Please tell us a story
We are in wait no bother."

Grandmother with a smile
In her rosy lip,
Began to tell a fairy tale
She sat on a chair hip.

She said about Cinderella
Whom people do ignore,
"Here is a story of orphan girl
She never feels bore."

Her name was Lucy
She had four brothers,
She had moral qualities
She was helping to others.

The brothers went on
A long journey for trade,
The wives ordered Lucy
To went with goats to glade.

There Lucy made the goats
Grazing, she was about to ruin,
A prince came near her
And he made her queen.

They took farewell from sisters-in laws
And they came back to kingdom,
There with all Lucy lived happily
She did get more freedom.

Lucy was moral in character
She was praying God,
God helps those creatures
Who pray him and nod.

Prince recognized the quality
And inner beauty of her,
Here Cinderella vanished
And they lived like Zur.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cinderella means person or thing whose merit or beauty goes unrecognized. Here there is story how Cinderella in a young orphan girl was vanished. Once the children requested the grandmother to tell a story and grandmother told them. Once there was an orphan girl named Lucy. She had moral qualities and she was helping to other. She had four brothers and four sister-in-laws.The brothers went on a long journey for business. Their wives sent Lucy to forest with goats to make them grazing. There Lucy was lonely and was in ruin condition. She was praying God.At that time a prince came and liked Lucy, gave affection. He married Lucy and they took farewell from sister-in-laws and came back to the prince's kingdom. There Lucy lived happily. God helps those creatures who pray him and who are helpful. Prince recognized the inner beauty and quality of Lucy. They lived in an interesting manner like Zur. This is the theme of the poem in brief. This is written in Deogrh, Odisha, India on this day of 6th December,2014 and is dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saheb Mohapatra 06 December 2014

i really liked this poem..........i hope every member will enjoy this beautiful story........greatly enjoyed it......thanks

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 December 2014

Nice presentation, words chosen nicely a brilliant poem and the concluding- Prince recognized the quality And inner beauty of her, Here Cinderella vanished And they lived like Zur. thank you deserve more than 10

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

a nice and thoughtful poem on the inner beauty of a person...great sir

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

a nice and thoughtful poem on the inner beauty of a person...great sir

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Hazel Durham 06 December 2014

A story about inner beauty that can't be ignored for long, Lucy was kind and had faith in God A prince saw her inner beauty blooming and she became queen! A beautiful write!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 December 2014

The story of Cinderella so beautifully retold in a finely scripted piece.......amazing write.....10/10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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