James McLain

Gold Star - 38,595 Points (1958 - / From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By)

Lust - Poem by James McLain

What is it really?
Is it within you? ..is it
your lips wrapped
around it?
Is it in the head?
Is it in the moon?
Venus really is it?
Is it always fault of Mars..
Is it always to soon?
If it's touched..once
is it lust..ing..?
If it's touched over
and over like book
shelves is it dusting?
What if it's touched
just to hear it make
it's noise that wet noisy?
Can lust make it feint?
If streams damn a lake
runs to rivers in currents
ocean is flavor is it lust?
Is lust like dusting, out so
call the maid, ring for the
butler, man it is armed.
Over maid being dusted?
What is it, is it lust..?
Is it very sweet musk?
Is it lust to touch one smile
into another two smiles
just to cover all the smiles?
What is lust..is it need or is
it simply thick seed running,
into wells never filling, a truth?
Is lust yours simply unsealed,
mounted, covered and filled?

Comments about Lust by James McLain

  • (6/29/2009 3:53:00 PM)

    Very interesting, nicely written,
    good job.
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  • (6/27/2009 5:55:00 AM)

    an interesting poem poetry, well done (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    thoughtful write
    lust is the fool's gold of love
    Sinking in a heart before
    falling in love...
    good write
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/24/2009 6:57:00 PM)

    'Is lust like dusting, out so
    call the maid, ring for
    the butler, man it armed.
    Over maid being dusted?
    What is lust..? '

    Lot of questions... poetry... lust... thoughts provoking nice poem.
    Love with 10+++
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  • (6/24/2009 6:48:00 PM)

    Thought provoking indeed. Always a mystery. :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    Lot to think about here IIP...great write...10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 5, 2009

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