Lyfe Poem by Stevens Cadet

Lyfe

Rating: 4.1


Life has it's up's, life has it's downs.

Sometimes there is happiness, sometimes there is frowns....

You think you know life like the back of your hand,

but sometimes it doesn't really go as planned.

Because life is really not like one big plot.

What goes around comes around like it or not....

You think it is cool to do it but some people die from pot.

Breaking in houses, nothing as personal space.

Say the wrong thing and will get punched in the face.

Turn around nothing is there turn back around a gun is there.

While the world keeps spinning round and round,

but some people keep on going down......

Why is life like a fallen tear, a panic fear, why my dear?

Isn't life amazing.

You think you know but you have no idea!

Life as a fallen tear..........................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

life is ups and downs.........depend on how you look at it.........

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Kelvin Owusu 16 January 2013

a nice poem, life is everything good bad ugly, with a positive mind life is bright regardless the struggles, good write

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Kelvin Owusu 16 January 2013

a nice poem, life is everything good bad ugly, with a positive mind life is bright regardless the struggles, good write

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Vipins Puthooran 25 October 2012

understanding of life itself is life/ good poem! ! ! !

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Poet Of The River 21 February 2012

wow. very well written. you look at more than just what is in fornt of you. that will make you a great writer in the future :)

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Sylva Portoian 09 November 2011

You understood life... early I think you are young... But your style is fair... You will proceed fast And understand life more... Till you reach my age... Wishing you health...wealth...happiness... As you run... stepping on grass and rocks

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Stevens Cadet

Stevens Cadet

Long Island, New York
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