Magnetic Attraction Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Magnetic Attraction

Rating: 5.0


Your love is very strong
You attract me ever I feel
As magnet attracts iron
You attract me every moment.

I feel this love is eternal
You feel my love too there
But you have given command
I have taken birth on Earth.

You are nice father I am son
Eternity dwells in us both
You are super I inherit
Your qualities as my right.

Dear ocean of light and love
Miracle you write each time
I fall in confusion but see
Magnetic attraction calls me.

Saturday, November 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luz Hanaii 18 May 2019

Love attracts love, the magnetic connection to the eternal Father. Very well crafted.

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Josey Alfred 28 December 2015

Dear ocean of light and love..... You remind all that we all have inherited a speck of that light and love. Though we are often are confused and Forget that we have his love and light in us. Thank you sir for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2015

This poem reminds me your another poem where you invoked the prayer in surprise to nature mother, here in this one the ocean is the metaphor for Almighty and the miracle by Him is unbelievable and unthinkable.Awesome poem Sir.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 November 2015

A superb and meaningful prayer of the almighty elaborating the threads of affinity between the Creator and human is general and the poet in particular. Enjoyed the meaning. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.

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Rahman Henry 21 November 2015

Dear ocean of light and love Miracle you write each time I fall in confusion but see Magnetic attraction calls me.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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