Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 191,865 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Magnetic Attraction - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Your love is very strong
You attract me ever I feel
As magnet attracts iron
You attract me every moment.

I feel this love is eternal
You feel my love too there
But you have given command
I have taken birth on Earth.

You are nice father I am son
Eternity dwells in us both
You are super I inherit
Your qualities as my right.

Dear ocean of light and love
Miracle you write each time
I fall in confusion but see
Magnetic attraction calls me.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love, spiritual


Comments about Magnetic Attraction by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Josey Alfred (12/28/2015 6:40:00 AM)


    Dear ocean of light and love.....
    You remind all that we all have inherited a speck of that light and love. Though we are often are confused and
    Forget that we have his love and light in us.
    Thank you sir for sharing.
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/21/2015 11:07:00 AM)


    This poem reminds me your another poem where you invoked the prayer in surprise to nature mother, here in this one the ocean is the metaphor for Almighty and the miracle by Him is unbelievable and unthinkable.Awesome poem Sir. (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2015 5:09:00 AM)


    A superb and meaningful prayer of the almighty elaborating the threads of affinity between the Creator and human is general and the poet in particular. Enjoyed the meaning. Thanks for sharing.10 + points. (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (11/21/2015 4:34:00 AM)


    Dear ocean of light and love
    Miracle you write each time
    I fall in confusion but see
    Magnetic attraction calls me.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 21, 2015



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