Kiye haiN jispe dil.o.jaaN niSaar tou hi hai
Elaj.e dard.e dil.e beqaraar tou hi hai
Chaman ka rung guloN ka nikhar tou hi hai
...
Read full text
Kya khoob ghazal h dear poet. Matla, husn e matla aur khaaskar maqta ajab Khoob! ! Let me quote: " Mahak rahee hai faza 'Aarzoo' ke sheroN se Aur is mahak meN basa mere yaar tou hi hai"
Loved reading the beautiful poem of love.. A ghazal garnished with the colors and fragrance of spring called love. Fantastic. A natural shahir/poet at her best! Great! 100+
Exactly the air is fragrant with your poetry. Coming straight from the depths of heart. A beautiful rendering of love and dreams. A 10
Masha-Allah, Bahut shukriya is behad khubsoorat ghazal se farmaish puri karne ke liye...... Aapki ghazalon mein sachchai, bholapan aur saadgi ek sath jhalakti hai...Dil se likhi baat seedhi dil mein utarti hai.....Crore daad....100++++ BhaNwar meN gham ki maiN kashti ko apni ley aayee Mujhe khabar thee keh dariya ke paar tu hi hai.......... Jis yakeen ke sath is safar ka aghaz kiya aapne...uska anjaam bhi kuch kam nahi raha.... Mahak rahee hai faza 'Aarzoo' ke sheroN se Aur is mahak meN basa mere yaar tou hi hai...... Thank u so much for honouring my request...Allah Aapko Khushiyon se, sehat aur aafiyat se nawaze...Aameen.
Thank you so much for such beautiful feedback Asim. Dost ki farmaish sar ankhon par. I thank you for being a part of this poetical journey. God bless.
Wa! La jawaab, Arzoo! What a mellifluous Ghazal it is! ! !