Mail # 1 Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Mail # 1



I sent you an ether mail
To tell you my sorry tale
If that bad that mail you feel
My request; delet that mail

09 04 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sumita Datta 23 November 2008

Mail can be deleted from the mail box... but can I delet the tale from my actual memory box... no... Kesavji...

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Stacey Watts 29 September 2008

Life would be so much simpler wouldn't it if we could delet what we don't like all the time. Very clever.

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Subbaraman N V 10 June 2008

Yes, at times we resort to!

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Kesav Easwaran 16 April 2008

not a haiku, deepti... it's a hai(ja) ku!

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Deepti Agarwal 16 April 2008

ha ha..thats a sweet one... but i dont think it fulfills the Haiku demands.... is'nt haiku's b supposed to b 5/75 sylaable count... i dont have much knowledge but do clarify me..

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A NEW FORMAT CRISPY

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 January 2010

Celestial [ethereal] mail are nothing but our thoughts…we dump in ether by penta or more bytes every picoseconds…LOL! Swami Vivekananda once opined all our thoughts are stored in subtle form…in ether…and operates thro’ the thinker or others especially Noble Thoughts faster than others...Thanks Sir… 10 [from heart] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Winnie Angel 31 December 2009

Well written piece. Yeah its so common but well written...Winnie

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Antonio Liao 14 July 2009

usual matter, we do...yet! special action it rejoice…..such wonderful poem of simplicity in a mess world....thank for the reminder....a 10 +

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a very clever mail...sir please read my ' a vote for 49 o' and 'a spring'

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