ANJALI SINHA


*** Make Me Or Break Me *** -In Top 500

Poem by ANJALI SINHA

Yes, miles away
your voice distinct,
far away
a cry is heard.
The night is freezing
is inviting
You beside me
Still craving.

Traversed have I
the arenaceous
deserts of despair.
Drunk have I the
wine of your love
from your goblets
of mystical eyes.

Eden sees play.
the glory
of the twilight skies,
like the glitter
of the midnight moon
the shimmer
of the fresh dew
on the first
green blade of grass

Excites me
your name’s alphabets.
On my rosary
spells your name
Haunts me,
your wet lips,
your perspiration
I inhale,
anaesthetize me.
Your looks
inebriates me
traps me
In your magical spell.
Lost am I
day and night
thinking of you.

Your,
intelligence
spellbounds me
eagerness
confounds me,
dedication
astounds me.
Your instinctive
brazenness hounds me
and kindness
surrounds me.

My heart you stole.
What was I doing?
not knowing.
fell for you.
In your contiguity
was my destiny,
loving you
was beyond
my control.
Fate,
brought us together
hoping never to part-

Make me,
the diamond
in your crown,
The moon
of your firmament,
The queen
of your heart,
The love
of your life.
Yours,
everything in life
One in you
MAKE ME YOU

MAKE ME OR
BREAK ME
ITS UPTO YOU

ANJALI SINHA
11-12-2008

THIS POEM I DEDICATE TO A SPECIAL PERSON WHO IS MILES AWAY BUT ALWAYS IN MY HEART AND MIND


Comments about *** Make Me Or Break Me *** -In Top 500 by ANJALI SINHA

  • Sita Madu-Wynn (6/27/2016 4:11:00 AM)

    Beautiful and well penned !!!(Report)Reply

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (4/14/2016 1:51:00 AM)

    Make me,
    the diamond
    in your crown,
    The moon
    of your firmament,
    The queen
    of your heart,
    The love
    of your life.
    Yours,
    everything in life
    One in you
    MAKE ME YOU

    MAKE ME OR
    BREAK ME
    ITS UPTO YOU

    Nice lines..Loved this poem.
    Thank you poetess.(Report)Reply

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  • Lyn PaulLyn Paul (1/28/2015 5:39:00 PM)

    Make me, the diamond in your crown Oh so beautiful Anjali. If this love is miles away let this not matter. Just read these incredible words each day to not be broken. Truly beautiful. Congratulations on TOP 500. Amazing! !(Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (7/2/2014 2:19:00 AM)

    A great dedication to a special person, best wishes, The poem is really lovely.(Report)Reply

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  • Ken E Hall (11/22/2009 6:40:00 PM)

    What a poem of love he must be pleased with this poem you are his everything except the apple in your pie.. phew written with a magic style which is your very own +++++10
    Nice to see you getting on with busy life
    regards(Report)Reply

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  • Nikunj Sharma (9/17/2009 3:08:00 AM)

    After a long long time, I am seeing a poem from you....this one is really sweet as honey , smooth as silk and heart stealing as a full moon...I like the sway in the poem, the motion is good too...slowly then the poem turns its direction and captures the reader.........wow is the word and 10 is the mark...(Report)Reply

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  • Anand Madhukar (9/15/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    A perfectly nuanced write, with each feeling, each emotion stretched out on the rainbow hued thread of your beautifully woven words. A perfect 10[do you even need to ask? ](Report)Reply

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  • Piyush Sharma (7/27/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    A love so pure. Complete surrender. In Physics, Resistance = 0 makes the best circuit, the smooth flow of love electrons. The title of the poem itself is amazing and is extremely striking and amazing. Good poem and u get yet another 10.(Report)Reply

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  • Siddharth Singh (7/13/2009 9:33:00 AM)

    Your fiery passion will completely melt the heart
    even though it's mles apart.(Report)Reply

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  • Christopher Murphy (6/8/2009 8:38:00 AM)

    loved the love in this...great work.Chris(Report)Reply

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  • Subroto Chatterjee (5/24/2009 5:54:00 AM)

    Hmmm...Mr. Mystical eyes has certainly captivated you young lady...! But from what I've gathered so far...he ought to be the diamond on YOUR crown..but all's fair in love, anyways....That's some paean on love you've written..And all the best..
    Cheers.
    Subroto(Report)Reply

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  • Vinod Ak (5/11/2009 11:38:00 PM)

    The yearning so beautifully expressed! You are already a diamond! May the special (and lucky) person adorn it on his crown as you desire! 10++++++++++(Report)Reply

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  • Isaiah Grey (5/10/2009 4:48:00 AM)

    This one pulled me under and wouldn't let me up for air. Breath-taking.(Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/29/2009 12:10:00 AM)

    anja; li we are poles apart.SEe my 'Cry not'
    i rate this 8(Report)Reply

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  • Runita Menezes (4/28/2009 12:32:00 AM)

    How easily we set someone on a pedestral! ! ! ! ! It is so true. A sea of emotions so eloquently put. An excellent write.(Report)Reply

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  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (4/13/2009 9:35:00 AM)

    Can he afford to make all what you want here? i guess not.At least the words will have a good breakthrough as it demands a 10 from me.(Report)Reply

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  • Thomas Coltrin (2/24/2009 1:36:00 AM)

    i like it a lot......and i know what u r talking about about, , , , , , i feel the same way(Report)Reply

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  • Ganga Dhar Sharma 'hindustan' (2/14/2009 1:39:00 AM)

    heart touching poem in a very simple language(Report)Reply

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  • Muhammad Ali (2/5/2009 7:27:00 AM)

    in words i cant describe the value. just super. carry on(Report)Reply

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  • Mahfooz AliMahfooz Ali (1/22/2009 12:05:00 PM)

    Becum ur fan..........


    want to revolve around..........


    wat a beautiful write.......

    10++++++++++(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 11, 2009