Yes, miles away
your voice distinct,
far away
a cry is heard.
The night is freezing
is inviting
You beside me
Still craving.
Traversed have I
the arenaceous
deserts of despair.
Drunk have I the
wine of your love
from your goblets
of mystical eyes.
Eden sees play.
the glory
of the twilight skies,
like the glitter
of the midnight moon
the shimmer
of the fresh dew
on the first
green blade of grass
Excites me
your name’s alphabets.
On my rosary
spells your name
Haunts me,
your wet lips,
your perspiration
I inhale,
anaesthetize me.
Your looks
inebriates me
traps me
In your magical spell.
Lost am I
day and night
thinking of you.
Your,
intelligence
spellbounds me
eagerness
confounds me,
dedication
astounds me.
Your instinctive
brazenness hounds me
and kindness
surrounds me.
My heart you stole.
What was I doing?
not knowing.
fell for you.
In your contiguity
was my destiny,
loving you
was beyond
my control.
Fate,
brought us together
hoping never to part-
Make me,
the diamond
in your crown,
The moon
of your firmament,
The queen
of your heart,
The love
of your life.
Yours,
everything in life
One in you
MAKE ME YOU
MAKE ME OR
BREAK ME
ITS UPTO YOU
ANJALI SINHA
11-12-2008
THIS POEM I DEDICATE TO A SPECIAL PERSON WHO IS MILES AWAY BUT ALWAYS IN MY HEART AND MIND
Your fiery passion will completely melt the heart even though it's mles apart.
A love so pure. Complete surrender. In Physics, Resistance = 0 makes the best circuit, the smooth flow of love electrons. The title of the poem itself is amazing and is extremely striking and amazing. Good poem and u get yet another 10.
A perfectly nuanced write, with each feeling, each emotion stretched out on the rainbow hued thread of your beautifully woven words. A perfect 10[do you even need to ask? ]
After a long long time, I am seeing a poem from you....this one is really sweet as honey , smooth as silk and heart stealing as a full moon...I like the sway in the poem, the motion is good too...slowly then the poem turns its direction and captures the reader.........wow is the word and 10 is the mark...
Make me, the diamond in your crown, The moon of your firmament, The queen of your heart, The love of your life. Yours, everything in life One in you MAKE ME YOU MAKE ME OR BREAK ME ITS UPTO YOU Nice lines..Loved this poem. Thank you poetess.
Make me, the diamond in your crown Oh so beautiful Anjali. If this love is miles away let this not matter. Just read these incredible words each day to not be broken. Truly beautiful. Congratulations on TOP 500. Amazing! !
A great dedication to a special person, best wishes, The poem is really lovely.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Can he afford to make all what you want here? i guess not.At least the words will have a good breakthrough as it demands a 10 from me.