Make Your Mind A Safe Place To Venture I Poem by Savita Tyagi

Make Your Mind A Safe Place To Venture I

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Make Your Mind A Safe Place To Venture

Our senses hold the world for us.
Beyond senses mind gravitates
In the world of its own making.
Let senses perturb you not. Make
Your mind a safe place to venture.

Evil thoughts are ominous companions
To fuel mental fire like fallen dead leave.
Keep good thoughts and do good deeds.
It works like earthshine to illuminate your
Journey through rough terrains of mind.

All the mysterious inner curves and bends
Can open new vistas for you to experience.
Fear not mind's tremulous peace shaking jolts.
Climb the trek for stable center in your highest
Quest for what lies beyond thought and senses.

Thursday, November 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: meditation,mind
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is the first of two poems. These take two conflicting views in account. None the less both hold valid and truthful views. Please read them together.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2017

We should always have positive thoughts. Negative thoughts bring negative results and melancholies. Concentration of mind or meditation can bring positive thoughts and healthy minds. Evil thoughts are ominous companions. Dear Savita madam, you have astutely and hauntingly inscribed this here. Brilliant poem with lofty insight!

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