Make Your Mind A Safe Place To Venture Il Poem by Savita Tyagi

Make Your Mind A Safe Place To Venture Il

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Earthbound View!

My senses hold the world for me.
Mind is not a safe place to venture!
Beyond senses mind gravitates
In the scary world of its own making.
That world still perturbs me.

Evil thoughts are my companions
To fuel mental fire like fallen dead leave.
Good thoughts and good deeds are
Not earthshine to illuminate my journey
Through rough terrains of mind.

All the mysterious inner curves and bends
Don't open new vistas for me to experience.
Fear shakes my mind in tremulous jolts.
Still to climb the trek for better life with my
Worn out senses till I die is my best choice!

Thursday, November 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thought for this poem came as I was posting my first poem ‘ make your mind a safe place to venture'. These thoughts are equally valid and hold truth for me in same way as the thoughts of my first poem. Please read both poems together.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 09 December 2017

I agree life is a risky journey so we should be careful in adopting a lifestyle. Wisdom should guide our hearts but sometimes it should leave heart alone and let it do whatever it wants to do.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2017

Good thoughts and good deeds are fuel for mental strength. A powerful poem this is.10

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